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#19

08-23-2011, 10:23 PM

Thanks for the feedback and the close read Aish. I've thought about that repetition of Namer as I've read through this. It's possible to kill the first instance I think because the language of the second implies the first lets see how that looks.

Much appreciated,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Logos - by Todd - 08-21-2011, 12:35 AM

RE: Logos - by LaGitana - 08-21-2011, 01:12 AM

RE: Logos - by Leanne - 08-21-2011, 06:27 AM

RE: Logos - by Todd - 08-21-2011, 09:04 AM

RE: Logos - by billy - 08-21-2011, 09:44 AM

RE: Logos - by Todd - 08-21-2011, 10:19 AM

RE: Logos - by billy - 08-21-2011, 10:29 AM

RE: Logos - by Todd - 08-21-2011, 11:37 PM

RE: Logos - by Leanne - 08-21-2011, 11:41 PM

RE: Logos - by Todd - 08-22-2011, 04:53 AM

RE: Logos - by billy - 08-22-2011, 05:24 AM

RE: Logos - by Todd - 08-22-2011, 05:51 AM

RE: Logos - by Leanne - 08-22-2011, 10:00 AM

RE: Logos - by billy - 08-22-2011, 10:08 AM

RE: Logos - by Todd - 08-22-2011, 10:45 AM

RE: Logos - by billy - 08-23-2011, 11:29 AM

RE: Logos - by Todd - 08-23-2011, 11:33 AM

RE: Logos - by Aish - 08-23-2011, 03:56 PM

RE: Logos - by Todd - 08-23-2011, 10:23 PM

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