08-23-2011, 03:21 PM
I wonder if you'd think about a colon in L4 -- nimbly shimmersurfs: crescendo
The cinquain is one of my least favourite forms, though that's most likely a very unreasonable prejudice of mine -- I like what you do with them though
Love "shimmersurfs", and the bookends of "voiceless" and "shyness" are very effective.
The cinquain is one of my least favourite forms, though that's most likely a very unreasonable prejudice of mine -- I like what you do with them though
Love "shimmersurfs", and the bookends of "voiceless" and "shyness" are very effective.
It could be worse