08-21-2011, 09:04 AM
LaGitana: Thank you for reading and commenting. I am very happy that it inspired such a strong reaction. Its always cool when something you write impacts someone.
Thanks for letting me know
Very appreciated.
Leanne: thank you for your close read. I agree with you on the you too edit(much cleaner). I think the issues you had with the two other lines might both be a bit of unnecessary belaboring. I'll make some quick changes in an edit(not enough for a full rewrite).
Thank you for walking me through your read. It was very helpful.
Best to you both,
Todd
Thanks for letting me know

Very appreciated.
Leanne: thank you for your close read. I agree with you on the you too edit(much cleaner). I think the issues you had with the two other lines might both be a bit of unnecessary belaboring. I'll make some quick changes in an edit(not enough for a full rewrite).
Thank you for walking me through your read. It was very helpful.
Best to you both,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
