08-21-2011, 01:12 AM
Oh my God........... I am truly in awe, humbled.
I cannot begin to critique this, I am not able. I have read it over and over and can only find pieces of myself buried inside the depths grasping for the Hope resting just within the trailing ending.... It has long since been that a piece, NOT written for me, has brought me to my knees in tears....
I thank you Todd, and all of you, for your help with my writing, but I am so out of my element in giving any "help" with yours....
laGitana
I cannot begin to critique this, I am not able. I have read it over and over and can only find pieces of myself buried inside the depths grasping for the Hope resting just within the trailing ending.... It has long since been that a piece, NOT written for me, has brought me to my knees in tears....
I thank you Todd, and all of you, for your help with my writing, but I am so out of my element in giving any "help" with yours....
laGitana
Do you realise that memories are like a bag of wooden nickels... Or a field full of men on wooden legs in a flash flood... useless ~ D.A.