Promenade (revised)
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Like just about every other piece of poetry I have read... I have no clue what it is about. (its something I am struggling with)

How ever, it is beautiful I really like "pearlescent secrets"
and "intentionally disguised"

I do not like the last line .
ending it at disguised leaves me pondering as to how, which I really like.
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Promenade (revised) - by Aish - 08-19-2011, 02:36 PM
RE: Promenade (revised) - by ckeo - 08-19-2011, 02:44 PM
RE: Promenade (revised) - by billy - 08-20-2011, 07:36 PM
RE: Promenade (revised) - by Aish - 08-23-2011, 07:53 AM
RE: Promenade (revised) - by billy - 08-23-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: Promenade (revised) - by Todd - 08-23-2011, 11:32 AM
RE: Promenade (revised) - by Aish - 08-23-2011, 03:27 PM



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