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08-18-2011, 07:39 PM

Thank you for your kind words and feedback Bilbo and Addy Smile

I think I'll remove the last verse as everyone seems to agree that it jarrs.

"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

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beauty - by heslopian - 08-18-2011, 03:09 AM

RE: beauty - by Todd - 08-18-2011, 04:04 AM

RE: beauty - by abu nuwas - 08-18-2011, 04:34 AM

RE: beauty - by heslopian - 08-18-2011, 06:54 AM

RE: beauty - by billy - 08-18-2011, 11:08 AM

RE: beauty - by addy - 08-18-2011, 11:53 AM

RE: beauty - by heslopian - 08-18-2011, 07:39 PM

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