08-18-2011, 06:54 AM
Thanks for the kind words and feedback Todd
I'll have a think your proposed changes.
I'm afraid I've never read a word of Baudelaire, so any similarities there are purely incidental. This poem, like a lot of my poems which have no punctuation for some reason, does, I agree, rely heavily on received wisdom. Thank you for the feedback abu
I'll have a think your proposed changes.I'm afraid I've never read a word of Baudelaire, so any similarities there are purely incidental. This poem, like a lot of my poems which have no punctuation for some reason, does, I agree, rely heavily on received wisdom. Thank you for the feedback abu
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe