08-14-2011, 05:37 AM
I agree with Leanne about the five lines to a degree. I almost feel that you can do away with the "her abusers...." sentence as it is almost TMI... but the next line, I like, except (and maybe this is an American vs UK thing... and correct me if I am wrong (although I never am, lol)) isn't a speed-ball (w/o the hyphen) some kind of drug? If you're talking boxing training equipment... it would be a speedbag, no?
Hey, I'm a chick, right? But I know boxers... and I've read about drugs... I could be right...
just my two cents... or pence. what ever does it for yea....
Hey, I'm a chick, right? But I know boxers... and I've read about drugs... I could be right...
just my two cents... or pence. what ever does it for yea....
Do you realise that memories are like a bag of wooden nickels... Or a field full of men on wooden legs in a flash flood... useless ~ D.A.


