08-11-2011, 02:42 PM
I like the changes in line length, it gives the poem more of a noir feel to my reading, though I'm not entirely sure why 
To be honest, the Oswald reference came at me a bit out of the blue -- I know who he was, obviously, but I feel I'm missing some larger connotation that might be more US-specific.
To be honest, the Oswald reference came at me a bit out of the blue -- I know who he was, obviously, but I feel I'm missing some larger connotation that might be more US-specific.
It could be worse