08-11-2011, 09:17 AM
Sid,
I don't have anything to offer by way of critique(sorry about that). I liked the poem, and I especially liked your word choices. Nothing about them felt mailed in. They felt like exactly the right words. Again, sorry I couldn't be more helpful, all I can offer is my appreciation for a pleasurable read.
Best,
Todd
I don't have anything to offer by way of critique(sorry about that). I liked the poem, and I especially liked your word choices. Nothing about them felt mailed in. They felt like exactly the right words. Again, sorry I couldn't be more helpful, all I can offer is my appreciation for a pleasurable read.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson