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08-09-2011, 04:58 AM

That's wonderful Sid!

The rhymes felt crisp. It was very funny with great word choices throughout. No nits from me.

Best,

Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Stopping Traffic - by ICSoria - 08-09-2011, 02:26 AM

RE: Stopping Traffic - by Todd - 08-09-2011, 04:58 AM

RE: Stopping Traffic - by billy - 08-11-2011, 08:47 PM

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