Eggshell Dance (Slight Revisons)

[Leanne]

Sid -- or anyone else, for that matter -- if there's something specific you'd like me to take a look at, please don't hesitate to just send me a PM. I'm sometimes a bit distracted (that's code for "really rather slack") when it comes to critiques, but I'd hate anyone to think I was ignoring them

As to expertise, chalk it up to a misspent youth that sadly involved no sex, drugs OR rock 'n' roll