08-08-2011, 01:41 PM
If I was really bold I'd post the stuff I wrote over twenty years ago, explain why it sucked, and attempt to salvage a few words...
Here's an opening pair of lines from one of my first poems to give you a sample.
the poem was titled Cause of Death
She was old and feeble
but that's not why they pushed her down the stairs.
Here's an opening pair of lines from one of my first poems to give you a sample.
the poem was titled Cause of Death
She was old and feeble
but that's not why they pushed her down the stairs.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson