08-08-2011, 11:02 AM
Hi Jack,
Aside from maybe adding some question marks to the shrinks questions or maybe italics, this is a smooth read. I especially like the depiction of the shrinks by their clothing and then very appropriately by their small eyes. They have no real answers but they obscure it through their incessant questions. I thought it was a tight, effective write.
Best,
Todd
Aside from maybe adding some question marks to the shrinks questions or maybe italics, this is a smooth read. I especially like the depiction of the shrinks by their clothing and then very appropriately by their small eyes. They have no real answers but they obscure it through their incessant questions. I thought it was a tight, effective write.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson