Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 3)
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not always hehe, i have been known to get it really really wrong Wink

i think all poets good and not so good need to put certain poems in a draw and keep taking them out for the rest of their lives. (i count you as one of the former in respect to poets) i just struggled with it and didn't know what else to say. it's certainly better than many poems i've read or written Wink that you did an edit deserved a response. thank you for taking it so graciously.
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RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel - by ICSoria - 08-08-2011, 06:43 AM
RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision) - by billy - 08-08-2011, 10:48 AM



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