Eggshell Dance (Slight Revisons)

[billy]

normally it's just done in the one thread but it's okay as long as both are in the same opening post

for me the 'at' works and because of the change in the 2nd (though 'veiled indifference' has been fairly well used) L's 5 and 6 now become (for me) more logical.
a def edit for the better. jmo

thanks for the read.