Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 3)

Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 3)

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08-08-2011, 09:25 AM

Thanks guys, for the comments. It helps on initial drafts to know if the connections are holding up. Is this any better? Or is it a step backward?

Thanks again,

Todd

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Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 3) - by Todd - 08-07-2011, 03:17 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel - by billy - 08-08-2011, 05:52 AM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel - by ICSoria - 08-08-2011, 06:43 AM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision) - by Todd - 08-08-2011, 09:25 AM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision) - by billy - 08-08-2011, 10:30 AM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision) - by Todd - 08-08-2011, 10:41 AM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision) - by billy - 08-08-2011, 10:48 AM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision) - by Leanne - 08-08-2011, 12:46 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision) - by Todd - 08-08-2011, 12:49 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision) - by Todd - 08-08-2011, 11:01 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision) - by heslopian - 08-10-2011, 03:32 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by Todd - 08-11-2011, 08:54 AM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by Leanne - 08-11-2011, 02:42 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by Todd - 08-11-2011, 02:51 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by billy - 08-12-2011, 11:14 AM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by Todd - 08-12-2011, 12:34 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by billy - 08-12-2011, 02:46 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by Todd - 08-12-2011, 03:04 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by billy - 08-12-2011, 03:08 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by Todd - 08-12-2011, 03:15 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by billy - 08-12-2011, 04:05 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by Leanne - 08-13-2011, 07:07 AM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by Todd - 08-13-2011, 01:41 PM

RE: Outside Room 7 at the Merryman Motel (revision 2) - by billy - 08-13-2011, 07:34 AM

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