08-06-2011, 07:09 AM
(08-06-2011, 01:11 AM)ICSoria Wrote: Billy, I absolutely loved the polysemy within this piece, especially that first line, which immediately drew me in. Taken from a common naval phrase, you gave it a uniqueness in your write (should Port be capitalized, or is that only when identified with a particular brand? :-).yes, i think you're right, it should be a cap p
I really do love that line in this!
Sid
thanks for the heads up. and the kind words Sid.