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08-06-2011, 01:11 AM
Billy, I absolutely loved the polysemy within this piece, especially that first line, which immediately drew me in. Taken from a common naval phrase, you gave it a uniqueness in your write (should Port be capitalized, or is that only when identified with a particular brand? :-).
I really do love that line in this! Sid |
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Visiting The Ex: - by billy - 08-05-2011, 04:50 PM
RE: Visiting The Ex: - by ICSoria - 08-06-2011, 01:11 AM
RE: Visiting The Ex: - by billy - 08-06-2011, 07:09 AM
RE: Visiting The Ex: - by Todd - 08-07-2011, 06:29 AM
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RE: Visiting The Ex: - by heslopian - 08-13-2011, 01:43 PM
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