Visiting The Ex:
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Listing from Port to starboard
I tried to follow the line of urine
home. Slant wise
over yellowed snow
my staggered piss took me,
up your garden path.
I dumped
on your pristine doorstep;
it was all I had left.

capped a p in port on sid's heads up and capped an i on the last line; thanks jack to small an edit to do a complete copy
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Visiting The Ex: - by billy - 08-05-2011, 04:50 PM
RE: Visiting The Ex: - by ICSoria - 08-06-2011, 01:11 AM
RE: Visiting The Ex: - by billy - 08-06-2011, 07:09 AM
RE: Visiting The Ex: - by Todd - 08-07-2011, 06:29 AM
RE: Visiting The Ex: - by billy - 08-07-2011, 07:29 AM
RE: Visiting The Ex: - by heslopian - 08-13-2011, 01:43 PM



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