Good and Evil
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it's pretentious because you (the 1st person) are telling us what you think in a grandiose ending. (i did say it worked Wink )

an image or something solid in bothe the verses mention their is little of substance, mainly they're wide assumptions with little meat.
they don't show us madness they just talk about it, maybe question it very broadly. these are jmo by the way so don't take them as written in stone. Wink
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Good and Evil - by heslopian - 08-05-2011, 09:20 AM
RE: Good and Evil - by billy - 08-05-2011, 10:10 AM
RE: Good and Evil - by heslopian - 08-05-2011, 10:19 AM
RE: Good and Evil - by billy - 08-05-2011, 11:05 AM
RE: Good and Evil - by heslopian - 08-05-2011, 11:16 AM
RE: Good and Evil - by billy - 08-05-2011, 11:34 AM
RE: Good and Evil - by billy - 08-05-2011, 11:24 AM
RE: Good and Evil - by Todd - 08-05-2011, 01:04 PM



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