sorry jack but i can't follow what's being said. the formats fucking my eyes up.
i can't see where i said remove is and are in the same line
any chance of writing the points down in poem format so i can understand better please. sorry for being a putz
this is what i meant;
There are no such things as imaginary worlds.
places spoke about in books,
lands of elves and lion gods,
patched together
from our own boring universe,
a poor girl's dress stitched into being
with carpet samples.
humans cannot grasp
a plain beyond our own. We have no knowledge
of what we can't see.
fantasy is truth we make mosaics of.
actually looking at it i think the enjambment needs a little work but that could just be me.
i can't see where i said remove is and are in the same line
any chance of writing the points down in poem format so i can understand better please. sorry for being a putz
this is what i meant;
There are no such things as imaginary worlds.
places spoke about in books,
lands of elves and lion gods,
patched together
from our own boring universe,
a poor girl's dress stitched into being
with carpet samples.
humans cannot grasp
a plain beyond our own. We have no knowledge
of what we can't see.
fantasy is truth we make mosaics of.
actually looking at it i think the enjambment needs a little work but that could just be me.