08-03-2011, 02:40 PM
I certainly appreciate the rhyming of lass and bun 
Subverting expectations is part of a good poet's job description.
Damn those buxom view blockers... this is wonderfully done, right from the title to the curmudgeonly ending.
Subverting expectations is part of a good poet's job description.Damn those buxom view blockers... this is wonderfully done, right from the title to the curmudgeonly ending.
It could be worse