Six After Sexty
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(08-03-2011, 09:01 AM)Heslopian Wrote:  Should "bun" be plural in the last line of the penultimate verse?
A very funny poem ICSoria. Mixing phrases like "sunlit shore" with lines about geriatric sex is geniusSmile
That also brings to mind a Seinfeld episode, where Jerry was dating a deaf lady who read lips. While dropping her off at her house, he wondered what time he should pick her up for the next date and asked her, "How about six?" She rushed out of his car, slammed the door and he was left wondering what he did wrong.
Around here, bun is a more direct euphemism for ass...at least as I heard it expressed in some humorous settings. BTW: I have no problem using the more direct approach, i.e. vulgar. In fact I am often known to be quite...direct in my own speech. I just feel that in light poetry, euphemisms can add to the humor.

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Six After Sexty - by ICSoria - 08-03-2011, 07:07 AM
RE: Six After Sexty - by heslopian - 08-03-2011, 09:01 AM
RE: Six After Sexty - by ICSoria - 08-03-2011, 11:12 AM
RE: Six After Sexty - by billy - 08-03-2011, 01:42 PM
RE: Six After Sexty - by Leanne - 08-03-2011, 02:40 PM
RE: Six After Sexty - by ICSoria - 08-03-2011, 03:09 PM
RE: Six After Sexty - by billy - 08-03-2011, 03:29 PM



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