Six After Sexty
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The title reminds me of when I went on holidays with the Boy's Brigade and the kids from our group would tease the Scottish kids by making them say "six," which sounds like "sex" in the accentBig Grin
Should "bun" be plural in the last line of the penultimate verse?
A very funny poem ICSoria. Mixing phrases like "sunlit shore" with lines about geriatric sex is geniusSmile
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Six After Sexty - by ICSoria - 08-03-2011, 07:07 AM
RE: Six After Sexty - by heslopian - 08-03-2011, 09:01 AM
RE: Six After Sexty - by ICSoria - 08-03-2011, 11:12 AM
RE: Six After Sexty - by billy - 08-03-2011, 01:42 PM
RE: Six After Sexty - by Leanne - 08-03-2011, 02:40 PM
RE: Six After Sexty - by ICSoria - 08-03-2011, 03:09 PM
RE: Six After Sexty - by billy - 08-03-2011, 03:29 PM



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