02-13-2010, 07:55 AM
Hi, I just wanted to say something, before I posted my poem. I came across(Billy's account) on yahoo answers. After, I was looking at other people's poem and noticed how people usually don't take the time out, to help people and give real critique. I am in Jr High and I`m trying to learn how to write poetry(really for myself) . Thanks..
Couple.
By Jessica/Jan 2010.
Exchanges of heated words,
fuel burning,
candle lights fading,
bickering back and forth,
constant rain pouring,
speed of lightning added,
tears rapidly approaching,
blood pressure boiling,
though rocks have fallen,
And gray has covered the sky,
they bought out the sun,
but, the shine shattered into piece,
the waves destroyed the picture,
strengthens of the waves over powered,
the picture decreasing
two faces left confused,
in a daze,
with no options,
no directions,
nor choices,
or motives,
Couple.
By Jessica/Jan 2010.
Exchanges of heated words,
fuel burning,
candle lights fading,
bickering back and forth,
constant rain pouring,
speed of lightning added,
tears rapidly approaching,
blood pressure boiling,
though rocks have fallen,
And gray has covered the sky,
they bought out the sun,
but, the shine shattered into piece,
the waves destroyed the picture,
strengthens of the waves over powered,
the picture decreasing
two faces left confused,
in a daze,
with no options,
no directions,
nor choices,
or motives,