If I Give My Confession (content) (revision)

If I Give My Confession (content) (revision)

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08-01-2011, 11:42 AM (This post was last modified: 08-01-2011, 11:20 PM by Todd.)

Billy, thanks you have a lot of nice call outs on what I agree are unnecessary words. I'm still thinking about the in after flay. I'll make some fast edits and then consider your other comments.

Much appreciated,

Todd

Okay, made some changes. Normally I don't insta-change, but it was a close read and I have been thinking about this for almost a year.

Thanks again Billy

The original title is what got me here, but I think I'm going to make one more title change.

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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If I Give My Confession (content) (revision) - by Todd - 10-20-2010, 10:12 AM

RE: I am a confessional poet and I write confessional poetry (content) - by billy - 10-20-2010, 11:01 AM

RE: I am a confessional poet and I write confessional poetry (content) - by Todd - 10-20-2010, 12:16 PM

RE: I am a confessional poet and I write confessional poetry (content) - by Touchstone - 10-20-2010, 05:28 PM

RE: I am a confessional poet and I write confessional poetry (content) - by Todd - 10-20-2010, 08:57 PM

RE: I am a confessional poet and I write confessional poetry (content) - by heslopian - 11-09-2010, 02:49 AM

RE: I am a confessional poet and I write confessional poetry (content) - by Todd - 11-11-2010, 05:30 AM

RE: I Write Cofessional Poetry (content) (revision) - by Todd - 08-01-2011, 12:45 AM

RE: I Write Cofessional Poetry (content) (revision) - by billy - 08-01-2011, 11:32 AM

RE: I Write Cofessional Poetry (content) (revision) - by Todd - 08-01-2011, 11:42 AM

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