07-29-2011, 05:46 AM
there's something very Freudian about this
not sure i can be constructive
i like it as it is with all it's connotations
maybe the 4th couplet doesn't dd much to the poem but it's only a minor thing. i enjoyed it.
thanks for the read.
not sure i can be constructive
i like it as it is with all it's connotations
maybe the 4th couplet doesn't dd much to the poem but it's only a minor thing. i enjoyed it.
thanks for the read.