i love the first two lines craig.
after that i think you need to cut away some stuff;
I press so hard leaving scars
my fucking pen wont write
my mind is frenetic
as I move over the lines
sometimes I want to sanitize
and jump right off the brink
my words fall, helpless
written in frozen ink.
jmo thanks for the read.
after that i think you need to cut away some stuff;
I press so hard leaving scars
my fucking pen wont write
my mind is frenetic
as I move over the lines
sometimes I want to sanitize
and jump right off the brink
my words fall, helpless
written in frozen ink.
jmo thanks for the read.