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07-28-2011, 04:35 PM
The meter in this is very close to Limerick style, whose lines have metric feet of 3, 3, 2, 2, 3. Your third lines have approximately 4 feet, which makes them read the same as lines 3 and 4 of a Limerick.
If you wish to give this poem a serious feel, I would re-work the meter slightly. Sid |
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