07-27-2011, 01:58 PM
(1st Revision)
I press so hard leaving scars
my fucking pen wont write
my mind is reeling a frenetic pace
as I move over the lines but twice
sometimes I want to sanitize
and jump right off the brink
my words fall with a helpless call
written in frozen ink.
** Just a small change on line 6 changed "fall" to "jump"
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(Original)
I press so hard leaving scars
my fucking pen wont write
my mind is reeling a frenetic pace
as I move over the lines but twice
sometimes I want to sanitize
and fall right off the brink
my words fall with a helpless call
written in frozen ink.
I press so hard leaving scars
my fucking pen wont write
my mind is reeling a frenetic pace
as I move over the lines but twice
sometimes I want to sanitize
and jump right off the brink
my words fall with a helpless call
written in frozen ink.
** Just a small change on line 6 changed "fall" to "jump"
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(Original)
I press so hard leaving scars
my fucking pen wont write
my mind is reeling a frenetic pace
as I move over the lines but twice
sometimes I want to sanitize
and fall right off the brink
my words fall with a helpless call
written in frozen ink.