Honed (2nd Revision))

[ckeo]

thing is CK, it's only ok if you don't want to improve.
if you do, then we'll try and help you to, it's why we're here.

as an experiment, write the poem as you would normally say it in everyday speech,
as if it was a story you were telling a friend. see what you come with. then from there
we can see how to improve it into a solid poem. just an idea mind but once you see the mechanism you'll realise
how to use it and abuse it.

I hear where you are coming from... that is actually how I did this one :/