Honed (2nd Revision))

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(2nd Revision)

The bronze swaggers, falling away
tender.. glistening with moist
drifting fog, falls to ashes on the pavement
exhaled anticipation, graceful gravity


Drifting sighs, glancing and dancing
portals admonishing, warm rivers to swim
yellow irony, into parchement bled
my tide has fallen, a new ones begins


Stuck eyed while turning, lava cuts deep
light as was beckoned, a change in her gait
pride in serenity, old wanting and waning
pastels with quills.. voiced inside the keep.
~ck~




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(revised)
The bronze swaggers, falling away
tender.. glistening with moist
drifting fog, falls to ashes on the pavement
exhaled anticipation, graceful with smite


Drifting sighs, glancing and dancing
portals admonishing, warm rivers to swim
yellow irony, into parchement bled
where tides have fallen, new ones begin


Stuck eyed while turning, lava cuts deep
light as was beckoned, a change in her gait
pride in serenity, old wanting and waning
pastels with quills.. voiced inside the keep.
~ck~



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(original)
The bronze swaggers, falling away
tender.. glistening with moist
drifting fog, falls to ashes on the pavement
exhaled anticipation, graceful with smite


Drifting sighs, glancing and dancing
portals admonishing, warm rivers to swim
yellow irony, into parchement bled
where tides have fallen, new ones begin


Stuck eyed while turning, lava cuts deep
light as was beconed, a change in gait
pride in serity, old wanting and waning
pastels with quills.. voiced inside the keep.
~ck~