On JR Hartley

On JR Hartley

Leanne Offline

R.I.P.

Posts: 1,568
Threads: 317
Joined: Jun 2011

07-25-2011, 08:22 AM

I love those adverts Smile

Iambs are spot on. I wonder if "can immerse" might be better than "could immerse"? A little flowy-er (shutup, it's a word).

Writing, fishing and loveable old men -- what a perfect combination for a poem.

It could be worse

« Next Oldest | Next Newest »

Messages In This Thread

On JR Hartley - by billy - 07-24-2011, 05:30 PM

RE: On JR Hartley - by critical mass - 07-24-2011, 09:16 PM

RE: On JR Hartley - by Todd - 07-24-2011, 11:00 PM

RE: On JR Hartley - by billy - 07-25-2011, 04:27 AM

RE: On JR Hartley - by Leanne - 07-25-2011, 08:22 AM

RE: On JR Hartley - by billy - 07-25-2011, 09:56 AM

RE: On JR Hartley - by heslopian - 07-25-2011, 08:35 PM

RE: On JR Hartley - by billy - 07-26-2011, 11:35 AM

RE: On JR Hartley - by ICSoria - 07-28-2011, 04:55 PM

RE: On JR Hartley - by billy - 04-24-2013, 11:14 AM

RE: On JR Hartley - by tectak - 04-24-2013, 07:11 PM

Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)

Login
Username:
Password:	Lost Password?
	Remember me