Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman

Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman

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07-24-2011, 08:14 PM

Great edit Jack. You truly brought this all together with this final strophe (really love S2). It's much tightr, and the whole piece has more power. No nits from me.

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Todd

The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson

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Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman - by heslopian - 07-24-2011, 07:07 PM

RE: Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman - by Todd - 07-24-2011, 08:14 PM

RE: Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman - by heslopian - 07-24-2011, 08:30 PM

RE: Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman - by critical mass - 07-24-2011, 10:18 PM

RE: Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman - by heslopian - 07-24-2011, 10:26 PM

RE: Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman - by critical mass - 07-24-2011, 10:40 PM

RE: Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman - by billy - 07-25-2011, 03:48 PM

RE: Revised: A Critique of Walt Whitman - by heslopian - 07-25-2011, 07:31 PM

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