Grandmother
#8
It is lilting. Her FINGERS play aCROSS the BARS...there is a term there I'm sure I'm ignorant of.

"as purple flowers burn like stars" is a stroke of genius.

No nits. Thanks for sharing, Jack.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-21-2011, 02:22 AM
RE: Grandmother - by Todd - 07-21-2011, 03:58 AM
RE: Grandmother - by Leanne - 07-21-2011, 04:39 AM
RE: Grandmother - by Todd - 07-21-2011, 05:25 AM
RE: Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-21-2011, 06:33 AM
RE: Grandmother - by billy - 07-21-2011, 08:25 AM
RE: Grandmother - by addy - 07-21-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Grandmother - by Aish - 07-24-2011, 06:12 AM
RE: Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-24-2011, 06:35 PM
RE: Grandmother - by critical mass - 07-24-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-24-2011, 10:28 PM



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