07-23-2011, 03:42 PM
well all i know is it's got the right number of lines. i did look up the rhyme scheme and that's spot on as well 
perfect iambic tetrameter as far as i can tell.
i like the dry dry cry cry rep you have going on, i like that you called it stone and not peach.
the poem for me is perfect in it's execution. and it's also a good read. i can't be more constructive as i can't fault it.
content wise...you'd have to eat a fair few but yes they certainly contain cyanide.
thanks for the read
perfect iambic tetrameter as far as i can tell.
i like the dry dry cry cry rep you have going on, i like that you called it stone and not peach.
the poem for me is perfect in it's execution. and it's also a good read. i can't be more constructive as i can't fault it.
content wise...you'd have to eat a fair few but yes they certainly contain cyanide.
thanks for the read