Communion

Communion

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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07-23-2011, 02:59 PM

hope you don't mind putting the origanl and the edit together, it makes it easier for doing a side by side

i think the 7th verse is the better for the edit.
my other points stand but not in stone. Smile

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Communion - by Aish - 07-09-2011, 06:06 PM

RE: Communion - by Leanne - 07-11-2011, 05:35 AM

RE: Communion - by addy - 07-11-2011, 09:05 AM

RE: Communion - by billy - 07-11-2011, 09:38 AM

RE: Communion - by Aish - 07-23-2011, 09:18 AM

RE: Communion - by billy - 07-23-2011, 02:59 PM

RE: Communion - by Aish - 07-24-2011, 05:54 AM

RE: Communion - by billy - 07-24-2011, 10:41 AM

RE: Communion - by Todd - 07-24-2011, 10:32 AM

RE: Communion - by critical mass - 07-24-2011, 10:51 PM

RE: Communion - by Leanne - 07-25-2011, 08:31 AM

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