Alone
#4
that doesn't mean it's good hehe. it seems i gave false praise, sorry about that ck.

for me it needs a strong edit. an anchor we can understand...more than ' a prince of night'
basically it's a little to general. it could do with a solid image or two running through the piece.
i still have to do big edits so don't take it to hard, i had to clarify what i said, so you didn't think it was perfect.
there's nothing worse than being patted on the back. please forgive me.

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Alone - by ckeo - 07-22-2011, 12:28 PM
RE: no title - by billy - 07-22-2011, 01:37 PM
RE: Alone - by ckeo - 07-22-2011, 03:57 PM
RE: Alone - by billy - 07-23-2011, 02:35 PM
RE: Alone - by addy - 07-25-2011, 09:28 AM



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