07-23-2011, 07:31 AM
I find it really hard to go past a pun or three 
This is wonderfully good fun. The meter is spot on, and you use assonance and alliteration throughout to send this trippingly off the untangled tongue.

This is wonderfully good fun. The meter is spot on, and you use assonance and alliteration throughout to send this trippingly off the untangled tongue.
It could be worse
