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07-23-2011, 07:07 AM

Aish, great choice on the centre justification, the poem reminds me of a balloon -- and the words put it just on the edge of bursting. Honestly, every time I read it I relate it directly to some situation I've been in, or narrowly avoided, or know someone who's been there... sometimes, very few words can have very many implications.

Truly an excellent little poem.

It could be worse

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Tide - by Aish - 07-21-2011, 01:57 AM

RE: Tide - by Leanne - 07-21-2011, 04:43 AM

RE: Tide - by billy - 07-21-2011, 08:05 AM

RE: Tide - by ICSoria - 07-21-2011, 12:38 PM

RE: Tide - by Aish - 07-21-2011, 09:58 AM

RE: Tide - by billy - 07-22-2011, 10:49 AM

RE: Tide - by critical mass - 07-23-2011, 12:17 AM

RE: Tide - by Leanne - 07-23-2011, 07:07 AM

RE: Tide - by Aish - 07-23-2011, 07:09 AM

RE: Tide - by addy - 07-23-2011, 07:13 AM

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