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07-23-2011, 07:05 AM

(07-20-2011, 06:55 PM)Leanne Wrote: the world is carved by axes
exes and whys These first two lines are dazzling me with brilliance, I must put on me shades
egos and eyes
without latitude

shake your plates When I reach this point something in my head links "Shake yer money maker" and I see asses
you may just start a wave

tidal or no
we have had enough of pierage

All I can say is you're a sharp witted lass and I hate you Hysterical

Hysterical

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Latitude - by Leanne - 07-20-2011, 06:55 PM

RE: Latitude - by heslopian - 07-20-2011, 07:25 PM

RE: Latitude - by Leanne - 07-20-2011, 07:44 PM

RE: Latitude - by heslopian - 07-20-2011, 07:46 PM

RE: Latitude - by billy - 07-21-2011, 08:03 AM

RE: Latitude - by Leanne - 07-21-2011, 12:43 PM

RE: Latitude - by billy - 07-21-2011, 01:53 PM

RE: Latitude - by abu nuwas - 07-21-2011, 12:08 PM

RE: Latitude - by Leanne - 07-21-2011, 12:45 PM

RE: Latitude - by Aish - 07-23-2011, 07:05 AM

RE: Latitude - by Leanne - 07-23-2011, 07:11 AM

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