07-23-2011, 06:07 AM
Brilliant title. Thankfully, not as long as the Whitman version. I love it.
Flowers still don't mean very much
you were born
you read this poem
you died
I am not fulfilled. Thanks Jack
Flowers still don't mean very much

you were born
you read this poem
you died
I am not fulfilled. Thanks Jack
(07-22-2011, 03:03 PM)Heslopian Wrote: the sky is the sky
and the trees are the trees
flowers don't mean very much
one day you'll be dead
so you won't be able to read this poem
or do anything at all
except be dead
you were born
you read this poem
you died
flowers still don't mean very much
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
