The Catharsis of Rage

The Catharsis of Rage

ckeo

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#15

07-22-2011, 01:37 PM

I enjoyed reading this. Smile

It would have been complete for me after "dying soul" the last two lines somehow seemed like an after thought.
I have always avoided writing in the first person myself because I could never pull it off but you did it well.

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The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 01:57 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by Leanne - 07-22-2011, 05:10 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 06:35 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by addy - 07-22-2011, 09:16 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by Leanne - 07-22-2011, 09:16 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 09:18 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by Leanne - 07-22-2011, 09:21 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 09:43 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by Leanne - 07-22-2011, 09:53 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 09:57 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by billy - 07-22-2011, 10:08 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 10:09 AM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by critical mass - 07-22-2011, 01:15 PM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 01:30 PM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by ckeo - 07-22-2011, 01:37 PM

RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 02:21 PM

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