07-22-2011, 09:18 AM
I love your alternative closing couplet. Very purdy
I'll make the edit once I've finished this. The long lines were inspired by Whitman. I've been re-reading his Leaves of Grass, and am finding I like it more in solitude than under tutelage.
I'll make the edit once I've finished this. The long lines were inspired by Whitman. I've been re-reading his Leaves of Grass, and am finding I like it more in solitude than under tutelage.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe