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The Catharsis of Rage
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07-22-2011, 05:10 AM
Jack, I haven't much time but something very odd struck me about this piece -- do you realise that up until the last two lines you have absolutely meter-perfect blank verse? The feet vary but the rhythm is excellent. If you'd like to follow that pattern, I'll focus on the last two lines when I come back and you'll have a great long-line verse.
It could be worse
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The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 01:57 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by Leanne - 07-22-2011, 05:10 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 06:35 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by addy - 07-22-2011, 09:16 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by Leanne - 07-22-2011, 09:16 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 09:18 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by Leanne - 07-22-2011, 09:21 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 09:43 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by Leanne - 07-22-2011, 09:53 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 09:57 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by billy - 07-22-2011, 10:08 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 10:09 AM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by critical mass - 07-22-2011, 01:15 PM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 01:30 PM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by ckeo - 07-22-2011, 01:37 PM
RE: The Catharsis of Rage - by heslopian - 07-22-2011, 02:21 PM
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