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Grandmother
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07-21-2011, 03:59 PM
I really like it... there's a kind of synesthesia quality to the imagery, the way it comes in bursts of impressions and color. My only nit; is the repetition of "purple" intentional? It could do without, but that's your choice of course.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-21-2011, 02:22 AM
RE: Grandmother - by Todd - 07-21-2011, 03:58 AM
RE: Grandmother - by Leanne - 07-21-2011, 04:39 AM
RE: Grandmother - by Todd - 07-21-2011, 05:25 AM
RE: Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-21-2011, 06:33 AM
RE: Grandmother - by billy - 07-21-2011, 08:25 AM
RE: Grandmother - by addy - 07-21-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Grandmother - by Aish - 07-24-2011, 06:12 AM
RE: Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-24-2011, 06:35 PM
RE: Grandmother - by critical mass - 07-24-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Grandmother - by heslopian - 07-24-2011, 10:28 PM
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