Tide

[ICSoria]

you're a really bad girl.

sometimes no amount of scrubbing can make us feel clean.
this works on so many levels and with so few words.

It took me a while to grasp what Bill was alluding to in his reply but when I re-read it this last time I was like: Hey...that's right!
Oftentimes, this is what it takes to convince me there is something in a poem that makes it worthwhile. You give it a passing glance and then you look back a second time and notice, perhaps a subtle metaphor or gentle play on words that makes stop and go: "Huh? Oh! Yeah...OK!

Sid

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BTW, Billy: Every time I see that avatar I chuckle! Every damn time!

Sid