Grandmother

[billy]

same here promenade, it the 'a' can be pronounced as it is in dad or father, i think the latter is the most common.

i only know about this cos i did a bit of reading on it.

the refrain often has more depth if you can change the grammatical structure of it.
example in the 1st line;
Her fingers play. Across the bars

it's even better if you can make all three refrains grammatically different. (or so they say)
as usual it's pretty nailed form wise and the content as usual is fresh. the images also work really well. jmo

thanks for the read.