Latitude

Latitude

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07-21-2011, 08:03 AM

(07-20-2011, 06:55 PM)Leanne Wrote: the world is carved by axes
exes and whys
egos and eyes
without latitude

shake your plates
you may just start a wave

tidal or no
we have had enough of pierage

did you mean peerage, i ask because i take it as an anti politico/government rant, (fuck the lords etc) love the play on words. and i love the 5th line which makes me think of how a prison riot starts or what school kids do when the dinners late. jmo

thanks for the read.

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Latitude - by Leanne - 07-20-2011, 06:55 PM

RE: Latitude - by heslopian - 07-20-2011, 07:25 PM

RE: Latitude - by Leanne - 07-20-2011, 07:44 PM

RE: Latitude - by heslopian - 07-20-2011, 07:46 PM

RE: Latitude - by billy - 07-21-2011, 08:03 AM

RE: Latitude - by Leanne - 07-21-2011, 12:43 PM

RE: Latitude - by billy - 07-21-2011, 01:53 PM

RE: Latitude - by abu nuwas - 07-21-2011, 12:08 PM

RE: Latitude - by Leanne - 07-21-2011, 12:45 PM

RE: Latitude - by Aish - 07-23-2011, 07:05 AM

RE: Latitude - by Leanne - 07-23-2011, 07:11 AM

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